The table below provides information on rental charges and salaries in three areas of London. Write a report for a university lecturer describing the information shown below. You should write at least 150 words.
This
table chart depicts the status of the rent prices and annual wages in three communities of London (Notting Hill, Regent's Park, and Fulham). At first sight, we can see that Notting
Hill Correct article usage
the Notting
area
is the most expensive neigborhood
with the highest economic status of the population.
Correct your spelling
neighbourhood
Firstly
, for the 1
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1-bedroom
bedroom
apartments
in the
Notting Hill people have to pay 375 Correct article usage
apply
pounds
, and their average annual salary is 98.500 pounds
. And the price of the 3 bedroom
flat is 738 pounds
monthly (twice as much as 1 bedroom
), and they have an annual wages
like two hold than 1 Correct the article-noun agreement
annual wages
an annual wage
bedroom
tennants
in Correct your spelling
tenants
this
area
.
Secondly
, The Regent's Park apartments
. The price of the 1 bedroom
apartment is 325 pounds
, exectly
twice smaller than the Correct your spelling
exactly
pric e
of the 3 Correct your spelling
price
bedroom
flat (650 pounds
). And about the annual salary I can say that there is almost the same ratio - 85.500 pounds
for the 1 bedroom
tenants and 170.500 pound
for the 3 Change to a plural noun
pounds
bedroom
indwellers.
The
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Last
last
, but not least, the
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is the
Fullham
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Fulham
area
, wich
has a different ratio - 1:3. So we can see from the table that the price is 215 Correct your spelling
which
pounds
and 600 pounds
for the 1 bedroom
apartments
and for 3 bedroom
apartments
respectively. Nearly the same ratio we can see in the annual wages - 56.500 pounds
and 157.500 pounds
respectively.
Summarasing
up all the data, we can say that in the poorest Correct your spelling
Summarising
area
of London, Fulham, the coefficien
of the prices of a dwelling and annual salary is different for Correct your spelling
coefficient
coefficients
unknown
Add an article
an unknown
reason
, Fix the agreement mistake
reasons
than
in Replace the word
then
two
other areas.Correct article usage
the two
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Vocabulary: Replace the words area, bedroom, apartments, pounds with synonyms.
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