The graph below gives information about the percentage of the population in four Asian coountries living in cities from 1970 to 2020, with predictions for 2030 and 2040
The line graph illustrates the proportion of the population, of four different nations, that lived in
cities
, from 1970 to 2020, and also
makes the future predictions for 2030 and 2040.
Overall
, since 1970, except Philippines
for all the other three countries, the number of people in urban areas has been growing steadily, and it’s predicted that Correct article usage
the Philippines
this
trend would
continue in the future.
On closer examination, of the diagram we observe that, in 1970 just above 10% of the total population of Indonesia and Thailand were staying in Wrong verb form
will
cities
, however
for Malaysia and the Philippines
this
figure was close to 30%. The number of individuals, of
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from
Philippines
and Indonesia, residing in urban areas grew at the almost same rates. Correct article usage
the Philippines
However
, until 1990 the percentage of the nationals who were from cities
was on upsurge
, after Add an article
the upsurge
an upsurge
that
there was Add a comma
that,
drop
in Add an article
a drop
the drop
this
value, in 2010, by almost 5%. Contrastingly, an opposite trend was seen in, therefore
at the end
of 2022
nearly half of the nation was in Add a comma
2022,
cities
. By 2040, it's assumed that in the Philippines
less than one-fifth of the public would be from villages or rural areas, in the case of the other 3 nations this
figure would range from 40% to 60%.Submitted by yashaswikhot on
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