The graph below gives information about the percentage of the population in four Asian coountries living in cities from 1970 to 2020, with predictions for 2030 and 2040

The line graph illustrates the proportion of the population, of four different nations, that lived in

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, from 1970 to 2020, and

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makes the future predictions for 2030 and 2040.

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, since 1970, except

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Philippines

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the Philippines

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for all the other three countries, the number of people in urban areas has been growing steadily, and it’s predicted that

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continue in the future. On closer examination, of the diagram we observe that, in 1970 just above 10% of the total population of Indonesia and Thailand were staying in

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,

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for Malaysia and the

Philippines

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figure was close to 30%. The number of individuals,

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Philippines

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and Indonesia, residing in urban areas grew at the almost same rates.

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, until 1990 the percentage of the nationals who were from

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was on

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value, in 2010, by almost 5%. Contrastingly, an opposite trend was seen in,

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nearly half of the nation was in

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. By 2040, it's assumed that in the

Philippines

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less than one-fifth of the public would be from villages or rural areas, in the case of the other 3 nations

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figure would range from 40% to 60%.