The chart below shows the results of a survey about peoples coffee and tea buying and drinking habits in five Australian cities. Summaries the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The chart below shows the results of a survey about peoples coffee and tea buying and drinking habits in five Australian cities. Summaries the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The bar chart illustrates the
expenditure
on
coffee
and tea habits in
Sydney
,
Melbourne
,
Brisbane
,
Adelaide
, and
Hobart
during the past 4 weeks given the percentage of city residents.
Overall
, going to a cafe for
coffee
or tea had the highest
expenditure
across all cities compared to purchasing fresh
coffee
. A notable
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trend is that
Sydney
,
Melbourne
, and
Hobart
all had comparable data, with slight differences,
while
the least amount was spent on buying fresh
coffee
across all 5 cities in Australia. In
Melbourne
and
Hobart
,
percentage
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of people going to a cafe for tea or
coffee
accounted for the highest
expenditure
, with well beyond 60%.
This
was followed by the
Sydney
, which was approximately at 60%.
Brisbane
was the next highest, with roughly 55%. The least amount spent was in
Adelaide
, accounting for just under 50%.
People
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spendings
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on instant
coffee
was the second highest among the 3 categories.
Hobart
and
brisbane
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Brisbane
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were slightly below 55%, accounting for the highest
expenditure
.
This
was followed
with
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Adelaide
and
Melbourne
, with expenditures marginally below 50%. The least
expenditure
was in
Sydney
, accounting for just over 45%. The category with the minimal
expenditure
was buying fresh
coffee
.
Sydney
and
Melbourne
contributed to just beyond 40%. The second highest
expenditure
accounted for marginally over 35% in
Hobart
.
Adelaide
and
Brisbane
accounted for the smallest share in all
catgeories
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categories
across all cities, with well over 30%.
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Vocabulary: The word "marginally" was used 2 times.

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