The two maps below show road acess to a city hospital in 2007 and 2010. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparison wherever relevent. Write at least 150 words.

The two maps below show road acess to a city hospital in 2007 and 2010. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparison wherever relevent. Write at least 150 words.
The two maps illustrate the roads used to reach a central city hospital in 2009, including the facilities linked to them, and the changes made by 2012.
Overall
, the main alterations were made to public transportation amenities, parking
access
, and traffic control features. In 2009,
one
simply turned northbound onto Healthy
Avenue
from Main Street and drove straight to Circle
Road
, from which
one
could
access
the car park. At that time, the parking lot was the lone parking area for both staff and the public. In terms of public transportation, six bus stops were located along Healthy
Avenue
. By 2012, two traffic circles were installed at the junctions at either end of Healthy
Avenue
,
one
at Circle
Road
and the other at Main Street. Circle
Road
remained the
access
road
for the parking areas, though there were now two
such
lots,
one
for staff to the south of the hospital and another for the public on its eastern side. The bus stops on Healthy
Avenue
were removed, and a bus station was constructed to the west of Healthy
Avenue
with
access
points at the traffic circles.
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