You have recently moved to a new place and haven’t got a chance to tell your friend. Write a letter to your friend, Where and why you move from there Compare your new place to old Where do u live now

Dear Aman , Hope you are doing well. Actually , I'm writing
this
letter to inform you that recently
i
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changed my house with the
newly
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location . So, that's why
i
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was
little
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bit busy these days , even
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though i
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i
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did not get
a
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time
to tell you. You know earlier
i
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was living near the
bramalea
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and
queen
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intersection ,but
i
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moved now near the
trinity commons mall
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Trinity Commons Mall
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. Because ,
i
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changed my job ,these days
i
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am working
in
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Amazon as a production associate
as
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a
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full
time
. So , it will
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too much
time
in daily up and down to reach the
work place
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. If
i
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talk about my new house and its surroundings . The rooms inside the home
not
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only
the
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spacious enough but
also
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luxurious
as well as
compared to
old
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an old
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house that was too
much
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tightly in space . Apart from that , the neighbours are
also
really helpful in nature in the new location . So,
i
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want
we
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should meet as soon as possible because it's been too
much
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time
we
did not
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see
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each other . I want to spend some quality
time
with you . I will wait for your response. Warm Wishes , Harjeet
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paragraphing
Ensure that each paragraph centers on a single idea to enhance clarity and coherence.
grammar
Pay attention to sentence structure and grammar to improve clarity and readability.
tone
The letter has a warm and friendly tone, which is appropriate for writing to a friend.
structure
The greeting and closing are well-structured and polite.

Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately

Linking words are very important in your essay.

To score effectively on your IELTS exam, you should make an effort to implement short concise sentences coupled with linking words.

Almost every sentence in your essay should have a linking word of some sort.

In fact, the only sentences that can omit linking words are your background sentence and thesis.

Linking word examples:

  • firstly
  • secondly
  • thirdly
  • in additional
  • moreover
  • also
  • for example
  • for instance
  • therefore
  • however
  • although
  • even though
  • despite

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Topic Vocabulary:
  • Relocate
  • Transition
  • Adjustment
  • Neighborhood
  • Amenities
  • Atmosphere
  • Homesickness
  • Community
  • Lifestyle
  • Cultural shift
  • Residential area
  • Scenery
  • Urban/Rural
  • Local cuisine
  • Public transport
  • Vibrant
  • Tranquil
  • Inviting
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