You have recently moved to a new place and haven’t got a chance to tell your friend. Write a letter to your friend, Where and why you move from there Compare your new place to old Where do u live now
Dear Aman ,
Hope you are doing well. Actually , I'm writing
this
letter to inform you that recently i
changed my house with the Change the capitalization
I
newly
location . So, that's why Change the word
new
i
was Change the capitalization
I
little
bit busy these days , evenAdd an article
a little
Correct word choice
though i
i
did not get Change the capitalization
I
a
Change the article
apply
time
to tell you.
You know earlier i
was living near the Change the capitalization
I
bramalea
and Change the capitalization
Bramalea
queen
intersection ,but Capitalize word
Queen
i
moved now near the Change the capitalization
I
trinity commons mall
. Because , Correct your spelling
Trinity Commons Mall
i
changed my job ,these days Change the capitalization
I
i
am working Change the capitalization
I
in
Amazon as a production associate Change preposition
at
as
Change preposition
apply
a
full Correct article usage
apply
time
. So , it will consuming
too much Change the verb form
consume
be consuming
time
in daily up and down to reach the work place
.
If Correct your spelling
workplace
i
talk about my new house and its surroundings . The rooms inside the home Change the capitalization
I
not
only Add a missing verb
were not
the
spacious enough but Correct article usage
apply
also
the
luxurious Correct article usage
apply
as well as
compared to old
house that was too Add an article
an old
the old
much
tightly in space . Apart from that , the neighbours are Correct quantifier usage
apply
also
really helpful in nature in the new location .
So, i
want Change the capitalization
I
we
should meet as soon as possible because it's been too Correct pronoun usage
us
much
Correct word choice
long
time
we did not
Verb problem
have
see
each other . I want to spend some quality Wrong verb form
seen
time
with you .
I will wait for your response.
Warm Wishes ,
Harjeet kaur
Change the capitalization
Kaur
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paragraphing
Ensure that each paragraph centers on a single idea to enhance clarity and coherence.
grammar
Pay attention to sentence structure and grammar to improve clarity and readability.
tone
The letter has a warm and friendly tone, which is appropriate for writing to a friend.
structure
The greeting and closing are well-structured and polite.
Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
Linking words are very important in your essay.
To score effectively on your IELTS exam, you should make an effort to implement short concise sentences coupled with linking words.
Almost every sentence in your essay should have a linking word of some sort.
In fact, the only sentences that can omit linking words are your background sentence and thesis.
Linking word examples:
- firstly
- secondly
- thirdly
- in additional
- moreover
- also
- for example
- for instance
- therefore
- however
- although
- even though
- despite