The circle diagrams provide us
data
on the main sources of electricity in the Republic of France over Change preposition
with data
30-year
period. The difference over the years Add an article
a 30-year
presented
in percentages.
Add a missing verb
is presented
Overall
, it is clear from the data that in 2010 nuclear power Linking Words
takes
the biggest pie of 67% regardless that in 1980 it was merely a fifth. That shows us sharp improvement which is tightly connected to Wrong verb form
took
overall
technical advancements that were made during that time. Meanwhile, hydroelectric energy showed itself as something inefficient dropping from Linking Words
mere
6% in 1980 to a very small portion of 2% in 2010.
Correct article usage
a mere
Besides
that, the charts illustrate other power sources Linking Words
such
as coal, oil and natural gas. In 1980 both gas and carbon were almost Linking Words
the
third of the chart at 28% with oil being at 22%. Change the article
a
However
, in 2010 those indicators showed Linking Words
dramatic
fall where natural gas declined up to 4% and Correct article usage
a dramatic
other
reduced to 13%.
To summarize, Fix the agreement mistake
others
pie
charts Correct article usage
the pie
presented
the significant changes in Wrong verb form
present
France
Change noun form
France's
energetic
field with nuclear power taking the leading role over the years, Replace the word
energy
whereas
other units showed only Linking Words
decline
.Correct article usage
a decline
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