The pie charts show the reasons people in Great Britain had for visiting art museums in the years 1990 and 2000. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The pie graphs illustrate
purpose
of Add an article
the purpose
Britian
citizens for visiting museums of art in two Correct your spelling
British
year
(1990 and 2000).
Change to a plural noun
years
Overall
, it can be seen that the number of people
going to museums because of several given reasons increased over time, with the notable exception of the reason associated by
filling their travel schedules.
In 1990, nearly half of total Change preposition
with
visiters
had Correct your spelling
visitors
intention
to learn and gain knowledge, and Change the article
the intention
this
situation did not change over the period, making up 45% of people
after 10 years. This
trend was followed by british
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British
people
who went to these facilities to spend time Change preposition
with the
the
loved ones and to attend a special exhibit, seeing Change the word
their
a
significant growth of 5 Remove the article
apply
percent
and 6 Change the spelling
per cent
percent
in 2000, respectively.
Change the spelling
per cent
On the other hand
, the percentage proportion of Britian
habitans who travelled to museums fill their free time on holiday dramatically dropped by 15%. Correct your spelling
British
In contrast
, the number of people
visiting these places with a desire to buy art has seen an upward trend from 1% to 5%.Submitted by Aqxniet on
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