The pie charts show the reasons people in Great Britain had for visiting art museums in the years 1990 and 2000. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The pie charts show the reasons people in Great Britain had for visiting art museums in the years 1990 and 2000.

Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The pie graphs illustrate
purpose
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of
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British
citizens for visiting museums of art in two
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years
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(1990 and 2000).
Overall
, it can be seen that the number of
people
going to museums because of several given reasons increased over time, with the notable exception of the reason associated
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filling their travel schedules. In 1990, nearly half of total
visiters
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visitors
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had
intention
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to learn and gain knowledge, and
this
situation did not change over the period, making up 45% of
people
after 10 years.
This
trend was followed by
british
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people
who went to these facilities to spend time
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the
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loved ones and to attend a special exhibit, seeing
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significant growth of 5
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and 6
percent
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in 2000, respectively.
On the other hand
, the percentage proportion of
Britian
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British
habitans who travelled to museums fill their free time on holiday dramatically dropped by 15%.
In contrast
, the number of
people
visiting these places with a desire to buy art has seen an upward trend from 1% to 5%.
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