Some people say it is important to keep your home and work place tidy with everything organized and in the correct places. What is your opinion about it?

It is generally accepted that residents and work. Should be tidy and

well organised

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well-organised

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things

in the exact

places

. I think

houses

and

workplace

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workplaces

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should be clean and organised and

this

essay discusses it briefly for the following reasons. To commence with,

houses

should be tidy in order to lead a healthy lifestyle. cleaning

places

bring

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brings

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neither diseases nor boredom to the population.

For example

, individuals suffer

resparatory

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respiratory

diseases when they do not clean their

houses

and workplaces because of dust. "Cleanliness is next to the godliness of every person and every

places

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place

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, and

as a result

, positivity can spread the surrounding

places

and mankind feels. more fresh at their home or working

places

.

Hence

,

houses

and working environment should be clean.

Furthermore

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things

should be organised properly in the correct place because it looks

more

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like more

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space we have

that

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apply

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and people can easily take

any

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anything

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things

without searching

it

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. Messy

places

always take more

places

to be occupied, individuals will suffer to take

things

.

For instance

,

office

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the office

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should be well organised, so workers can easily take any documents from shelves. Henceforth,

places

should be organised properly where

is

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things are

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located of

things

. In conclusion, it is true that

place

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places

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of

houses

and work should be tidy because it brings numerous positive vibes

coupled with

being fresh on the whole day

as well as

things

should be organised properly in the correct place because it helps to take any documents and products Without searching.

Therefore

, I think

houses

and work environment should be clean and I hope

this

bring

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more beneficial to human beings.