The map below is of the town of Canterbury. A new school (S) is planned for the area. The map shows two possible sites for the school.

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Nowadays, governments are more aware of the benefits of schools.

Therefore

, they are implementing new schools to make a wide range of citizens utilise it. The presented map demonstrates the two possible sides to constructing a new school in Canterbury.

Site

1, The most beneficial thing about

this

side is that it will serve the students who live in the countryside region.

This

area has a low infrastructure with low road quality. It

also

will assist about 7000 citizens in Sturry city.

However

, the citizens in Chartham city will suffer to arrive at the

site

On the other hand

Site

2 is in the town centre,

thus

the students can enjoy other facilities in

this

region.

Moreover

, There is not any traffic zone ,

hence

they will be able to walk for free and safely.

This

site

also

in the middle between both Chartham and Sturry city, so it will help about 11500 people.

Overall

Site

2 pros overshadow the pros of

Site

1. The priority of constructing a new school is to serve the most amount of individuals.

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The map below is of the town of Canterbury. A new school (S) is planned for the area. The map shows two possible sites for the school.

Some people think that language school be taught in small classes, while other people think the number of students in a language class does not matter. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

Question B Large companies should pay higher salaries to CEOs and executives compared to other workers. To what extent do you agree or disagree? (Write 250 words.)

According to an international travel magazine, many tourists today fly straight to their holiday resort and almost never leave it. Unlike tourist in the 1960s and 70s, they return home with no experience of the local culture. Why do you think this happen? How was tourism different in the past?

THE PROCCES SHOW PROCCES OF MAKING COCOA BEANS AND CHOCOLATE

The rate of zoos in many countries has grown up, and it is commonly believed that they are cruel and ought to be banned. In my opinion, I disagree with this view because zoos can help animals in many different aspects.