The line graph shows the changes in the populations of six different areas of the world between 1960 and 2010. Summaries the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.
The line compares the six different areas of the world about the
change
of the populations from 1960 until 2010, and Use synonyms
using
the urban and population trends and trends in age structure.
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uses
the
summary, the people have the same Correct article usage
apply
change
in the Use synonyms
trend
of age structure between 1970-2040 on the under 15, and over 65 categories. Use synonyms
Further
, the total Linking Words
of
Change preposition
apply
change
between 1960-2040 is the highest compared with the other categories.
Based on the line graph, the Use synonyms
trend
in age is the highest around the 15-60 years old with 35 when the under 15 and over Use synonyms
65 year old
have lower Add a hyphen
65-year-old
change
just 5. In the Use synonyms
trend
, people Use synonyms
with
under 65 years old is the lowest Change preposition
apply
on
1960 around 3 of Change preposition
in
change
.
Use synonyms
Further
, if we compare Linking Words
between
the rural and urban Change preposition
apply
population
, Fix the agreement mistake
populations
urban
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the urban
an urban
trend
has the lowest Use synonyms
change
and fluctuation because of under 10 Use synonyms
when
rural has the middle in the Correct word choice
while
change
around 38.Use synonyms
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