The chart below shows the expenditure of two countries on consumer goods in 2010. You may spend 20 minutes to complete the task

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The provided histogram depicts the amount of money spent

for

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consumer products in the

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and France in 2010.

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, it

is exhibits

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that people in both countries purchased cars the most compared to the four other goods.

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the data, 450.000 EUR of the

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citisen's

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citizen's

citizens

budget went to buy the automobile

while

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French

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the French

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used 400.000 EUR for the same reason.

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, is known that the second most popular commodity

are

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books in the United Kingdom and computers in France. Moving

further

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, it is revealed that the least

favorite

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favourite

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produce is

perfume

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a perfume

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for the French and cameras in the

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. The graph

also

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desplays

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displays

interesting

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contrast in the

cameras

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camera

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category where more than 350.000 pounds of the

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residents

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residents'

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money went to get it

while

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French

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France

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, it is the

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last

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least

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prefered

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preferred

product with only around 150.000 pounds used to get it.

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Common mistake: Your writing should be 150-250 words.

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Vocabulary: Replace the words uk with synonyms.

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7
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meeting the goal of 7 or more
1
Word repetition
meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
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<4

Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 4.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Introduction & conclusion present

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 4.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 6.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

3 paragraphs

144 words

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