The chart below shows information about Heart Attacks by Age and Gender in USA. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. • You should write at least 150 words. • You should spend about 20 minutes on this task.
The bar chart shows the number of people in the USA who have
heart
attacks
, categorized by age
range and gender.
Overall
, the bar chart indicates that heart
attacks
are more common in older age
groups in the USA. The highest incidence of heart
attacks
is among people older than 65 years. In every age
group
, women
experience fewer heart
attacks
than men
.
The younger generation, between 29 to 44 years old, has the fewest heart
attacks
, with 123,000 men
and only 3,000 women
affected. The middle age
group
, from 45 to 64, experiences a significant increase, with 424,000 men
and 136,000 women
affected.
In the elderly group
, those older than 65, men
see a slight increase, accounting for 440,000 heart
attacks
. Women
in this
age
group
see a dramatic surge to 374,000 heart
attacks
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Vocabulary: Replace the words heart, attacks, age, group, women, men with synonyms.
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