Some people think that all university students should study whatever they like. Others believe that they should only be allowed to study subjects that will be useful in the future, such as those related to science and technology. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

There are some groups of individuals who

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that

students

in tertiary education should only be allowed to learn

science

and

technology

as it would benefit the nation,

however

, there are opposing

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saying that

student

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students

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should be allowed to pursue any

studies

they like as it will contribute to

diversity

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of

society

. On the one hand, there are various reasons for universities to

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courses that will

useful

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in the

future

. In my perspective, courses

such

as medicine, engineering and information

technology

provides

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job opportunities, career progress, better

salary

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and an improvement

of

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quality

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of life of the

students

in the

future

.

Besides

, by forcing people to choose

studies

related to

science

and

technology

,

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can ensure that skills and knowledge gaps in

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society

can be covered.

Finally

,

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focusing

students

into

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such

courses,

it

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would contribute to

the

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economy

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growth, new

invention

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, and greater

future

prosperity.

On the other hand

, in my opinion,

students

should have the

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to pursue any area of

studies

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they want.

This

is because

,

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it will benefit

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society

if

students

are passionate about their work.

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, one cannot be sure

that

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which area of

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would

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be sought after in the

future

. It could be that

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employers are seeking for

creativity

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worker more

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than practical and technical skills.

Therefore

, if

that is

the case, it might as well that

students

pursue art

studies

such

as art, history and philosophy than

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science

and

technology

. In conclusion,

although

, studying

science

and

technological

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has its own

pro

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but

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I certainly believe that pursuing own passion will create

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more diverse and

stress free

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citizens and more happier

society

.