WRITING TASK 1 You should spend about 20 minutes on this task. The chart below shows the results of a survey about people's coffee and tea buying and drinking habits in five Australian cities. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. Write at least 150 words.

WRITING TASK 1

You should spend about 20 minutes on this task.

The chart below shows the results of a survey about people's coffee and tea buying and drinking habits in five Australian cities.

Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

Write at least 150 words.
This
table chart gives key information about the proportion of tea and
coffee
drinking and buying habits in five Australian
cites
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cities
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. The units are measured in percentage.
Overall
, it is clear from the graph that the largest amount of
the
Correct article usage
apply
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residents is who went to a cafe for
coffee
or tea in all cities.
In addition
, in
this
category ratio
reach
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reached
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its peak in Melbourne at 64%.
Whereas
, the
least
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lowest
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percentage at 49 percent.
According to
what is shown, Hobart has the biggest ratio of its dwellers in the group that went to
cafe
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cafes
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at 63 per cent.
Subsequently
, the group who bought instant
coffee
and who bought fresh
coffee
at 54% and 44% respectively. In terms of
sydney
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Sydney
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the largest amount of the residents prefer to attend the cafe
at
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apply
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above 60%.
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Common mistake: Your writing should be 150-250 words.
Vocabulary: Replace the words coffee with synonyms.
Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "information" in your introduction.
Vocabulary: The word "amount" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "percentage" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "ratio" was used 2 times.
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