WRITING TASK 1 You should spend about 20 minutes on this task. The chart below shows the results of a survey about people's coffee and tea buying and drinking habits in five Australian cities. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. Write at least 150 words.
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This
table chart gives key information about the proportion of tea and coffee
drinking and buying habits in five Australian cites
. The units are measured in percentage.
Correct your spelling
cities
Overall
, it is clear from the graph that the largest amount of the
residents is who went to a cafe for Correct article usage
apply
coffee
or tea in all cities. In addition
, in this
category ratio reach
its peak in Melbourne at 64%. Wrong verb form
reached
Whereas
, the least
percentage at 49 percent.
Correct word choice
lowest
According to
what is shown, Hobart has the biggest ratio of its dwellers in the group that went to cafe
at 63 per cent. Fix the agreement mistake
cafes
Subsequently
, the group who bought instant coffee
and who bought fresh coffee
at 54% and 44% respectively.
In terms of sydney
the largest amount of the residents prefer to attend the cafe Change the capitalization
Sydney
at
above 60%.Change preposition
apply
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Common mistake: Your writing should be 150-250 words.
Vocabulary: Replace the words coffee with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "information" in your introduction.
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Vocabulary: The word "amount" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "percentage" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "ratio" was used 2 times.
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