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The graphs below show four categories of citrus fruits and the top three countries to which these were exported (in thousand tonnes) in 2012. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.

The graphs below show four categories of citrus fruits and the top three countries to which these were exported (in thousand tonnes) in 2012. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.
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This
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 report derives from the listed bar charts which enumerate the information on four kinds of citrus
fruits
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,
such
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 as Oranges, Lemons, Grapefruits, and others in conjunction with the top three
countries
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 where these
fruits
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 were exported in 2012. The unit of measurement is in
thousand
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tonnes
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. A glance at the charts reveals that the most exported
fruits
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 were oranges
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 the most obtained country by
fruits
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 was Mexico.
In addition
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, Egypt was the only
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country that experienced fewer supplies of
fruits
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 in 2012.
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 with, the most substantial export of oranges was in South Africa consisting of slightly more than 1000
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tonnes
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 followed by a tremendous export of grapefruits in Turkey comprising a sharp 400
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tonnes
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, and the export of lemons of approximately 500
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tonnes
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. What's more, other
fruits
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 were found mostly in Mexico rather than in Egypt and the USA. As regards
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 with the biggest exports, Mexico gained an aggregate 1200 figures of exported
fruits
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, compared to other
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, more explicitly, the USA which placed second place in most exported
countries
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 and Egypt the third place with a greater quantity of
tonnes
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 of moderately more than 500.
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