Nowadays the advancement of technology has covered all parts of the globe,
as well as
the populations. Linking Words
Therefore
, many buildings are being Linking Words
builded
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built
instead
of looking after the old ones Linking Words
due to
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costing
of Replace the word
cost
reparing
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repairing
reporting
is
too expensive Wrong verb form
being
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that
is debated among the public. I totally disagree with the statement above which I will explain in the following paragraph.
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which
To begin
with, old constructions have their own unique structure that Linking Words
hold
cultural and historical heritage. That Change the verb form
holds
why
it is significant to Add a missing verb
is why
perserve
its identity so that the next generations will know and learn about their ancestors. Correct your spelling
preserve
For instance
, Linking Words
Malaysia
, the Change preposition
in Malaysia
comunities
are still maintaining long Correct your spelling
communities
house
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houses
or
called Rumah Panjang Correct word choice
apply
that
means a house is extended in length and Correct pronoun usage
which
it
can accommodate up to thirty families. Correct pronoun usage
apply
In addition
, Linking Words
this
helps to foster a sense of community and continuity among the locals
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On the other hand
, some might Linking Words
thinks
that spending lots of money on repairing old buildings is a waste but it is wrong . As we can see, restoration costs can be higher but in the Change the verb form
think
long-term
if the buildings Add a comma
long-term,
are well maintain
, it can be lower in price than building new ones Change the verb form
are well maintained
continuosly
. Correct your spelling
continuously
For example
, Linking Words
constructs
a new place Wrong verb form
constructing
need
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needs
enormous
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an enormous
amout
of materials , Correct your spelling
amount
amounts
not to mention
, the environment Linking Words
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also
being polluted and resources are being Add a missing verb
is also
waste
compared to Wrong verb form
wasted
restore
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restoring
a
old building. Change the article
an
Thus
, restored old structures can attract tourists that can bring profits to Linking Words
economy
.Add an article
the economy
However
, It is never wrong to build new Linking Words
skycrapers
but Correct your spelling
skyscrapers
also
to think for the economic benefits.
In conclusion , I strongly disagree with the trend Linking Words
while
considering Linking Words
the
old places often hold Correct your spelling
that
it
identity and heritage that will Change the pronoun
its
be pass
to Change the verb form
be passed
next
future generations to explore and experience.Correct article usage
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