The two maps below present an island, before and after the construction of some tourist facilities. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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This
map illustrates the development of the township of Ryemouth between 1995 and the present day.
Firstly
, in 1995 housing was located in the west of Ryemouth and now this
housing is staying in the same place until to this
day. And, years later this
dwelling was significantly increased. On the other hand
, there was only a hotel in the southeast of this
town which had car parking.
Secondly
, the fish market was demolished and it was converted into apartments. Although
, Correct word choice
However
farmland
with Correct article usage
the farmland
forest
park was completely transformed Correct article usage
a forest
to
Change preposition
into
the
golf area within the tennis court. But, the cafe was in a similar position in 1995 and until the present time.
Correct article usage
a
Overall
, all these completely transformed places were changed and some of them were in the same identical location.Submitted by akzharkynzhamal on
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