The two maps below present an island, before and after the construction of some tourist facilities. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The two maps below present an island, before and after the construction of some tourist facilities.

Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
This
map illustrates the development of the township of Ryemouth between 1995 and the present day.
Firstly
, in 1995 housing was located in the west of Ryemouth and now
this
housing is staying in the same place until to
this
day. And, years later
this
dwelling was significantly increased.
On the other hand
, there was only a hotel in the southeast of
this
town which had car parking.
Secondly
, the fish market was demolished and it was converted into apartments.
Although
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However
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,
farmland
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the farmland
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with
forest
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a forest
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park was completely transformed
to
Change preposition
into
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the
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a
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golf area within the tennis court. But, the cafe was in a similar position in 1995 and until the present time.
Overall
, all these completely transformed places were changed and some of them were in the same identical location.
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