The chart below gives information about how families in one country spent their weekly income in 1968 and in 2018. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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graph illustrates the comparison of the weekly income between 1968 and 2018.
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Overall
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It is clear that
the proportion of food showed the most significant change from 1968 to 2018. Linking Words
Additionally
, the figure for housing remained unchanged in the same time frame.
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although
the fraction of housing and clothing and Linking Words
footware
began at 10%, housing increased to nearly 8%, but clothing and Correct your spelling
footwear
footware
went down to 5%. Correct your spelling
footwear
Moreover
, in 1968, the percentage of food, Linking Words
and
fuel and power accounted for around 35% and 6%, but they dropped to approximately 17% and 4%, respectively.
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Furthermore
, the percentage of leisure and transport went up almost by 14% and 6%, over the fifty-year period. Linking Words
In contrast
, the figure for personal goods decreased to 4% in the same time period. Throughout the entire period, the proportion of leisure reached a peak of 22% in 2018.Linking Words
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