Artificial Intelligence will soon replace teachers in the classroom.

 Do you Agree with this statement? What is an alternative to traditional face-to-face teaching?

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used in multiple sectors nowadays, and
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is believed it will replace instructors in the class.
I disagree with the statement as Machine learning can’t focus on individual preferences,
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teaching method.
 On the one hand, AI is indeed making huge progress in every field,
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field for the time being. A Human understands emotions, he can see if a student has any problem understanding the lecture.
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can teach each student differently
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their learning methods.
Whereas
, a machine will only focus on one method without focusing on each student’s learning ability.
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in the classroom comparatively. Meanwhile, tutors can use artificial intelligence to adopt different ways to educate.
On the other hand
, E-learning is an
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teaching. Every university pupil learns mostly from online platforms,
for example
, Udemy, Khan Academy, or Edxcource are great platforms where we can study all the subjects without going to classes. It has many
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of teaching methods, each instructor has their own way of elaborating
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subject.
This
way, students not only can get knowledge but they can choose their own time
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their preferences.

To conclude
, Artificial Intelligence can help a tutor in teaching but can’t replace them till it can adopt feelings and understand human
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While
there are multiple ways of learning without going to school, students can get many benefits from online platforms.
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Make sure to expand your points further and provide a more comprehensive response, particularly where you discuss the benefits and limitations of AI and alternatives to traditional teaching. This will demonstrate deeper engagement with the topic.
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Work on developing clearer, more detailed ideas within each paragraph. This will help convey your points more effectively and add depth to your argument.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • Personalized learning
  • Administrate tasks
  • Customized feedback
  • Virtual reality
  • Immersive experiences
  • Online learning platforms
  • Massive Open Online Courses (MOOCs)
  • Blended learning
  • Social learning platforms
  • Community-based learning
  • Peer-to-peer interactions
  • Technological integration
  • Adaptive learning
  • Real-time data analysis
  • Scalable education solutions
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