The bar chart below shows the top ten countries for the production and consumption of electricity in 2014.

The bar chart below shows the top ten countries for the production and consumption of electricity in 2014.
IELTS Writing Task Chart for The bar chart below shows the top ten countries for the production and consumption of electricity in 2014.
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The chambers chart illustrates the key information of electricity manufacturing and
exhausting
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of the top ten countries in
year
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the year
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2014 and the units
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in
billion
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kWh
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.
Overall
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, China is
in
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the highest level and power production
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is
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5398
billion
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kWh
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and consumption is 5322
billion
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kWh
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.
Secondly
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,
United
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States
produce
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produced
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4099 and used 3866.
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, both countries in
top
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level as other countries
no
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more than about 1060kWh.
In addition
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, Russia is in third ,Japan in 4th and India in 5th place. Next
Canda
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Canada
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, France, Brazil, Germany and Korea Rep. gradually mentioned.
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Germany is in 9th place,
consumption
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the consumption
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of power is more than
production
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the production
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.
According to
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the
graph
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there is
best
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the best
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power saving in India and Canada because more than 100
billion
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kWh
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electricity
saving
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was saved
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in 2014.

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Sentences: Add more complex sentences.
Common mistake: Your writing should be 150-250 words.
Vocabulary: Replace the words billion, kwh with synonyms.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • megawatt-hours (MWh)
  • electricity grid
  • renewable energy sources
  • fossil fuels
  • energy efficiency
  • consumption patterns
  • power generation
  • industrial demand
  • residential use
  • transmission losses
  • energy imports
  • sustainability
  • carbon footprint
  • energy policy
  • capacity
  • infrastructure
  • demand and supply
  • electrification
  • energy security
  • grid reliability
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