The charts below show the proportion of people’s total spending in a particular European country was spent on different commodities and services in 1958 and in 2008. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The charts below show the proportion of people’s total spending in a particular European country was spent on different commodities and services in 1958 and in 2008.

Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The present pie charts compare data about the percentage of people’s total spending in a particular country in Europe that was spent on various items and services in both 1958 and 2008.
Overall
, in the first year clothes bought were the main things
instead
of Luxury goods;
however
, in the second time people preferred to spend money on what house bought, but they did not like travelling a lot.
According to
the 1958 graph, the best thing that society bought were costumes at 32%; the second one was housing which had 10% less than the first thing;
moreover
, entertainment, travel or transportation, food, and Luxury goods respectively.
In addition
,the 2
last
categories were nearly the same number. The plot of 2008 demonstrates houses, the initial thing, was absolutely the same as clothes in 1958;
furthermore
,
secondly
was the two
finally
things in 1958, increased and had a 17%;
then
entertainments, clothes, and travel or transportation had 2, 20, and 10 per cent reduced.
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