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The chart below shows what Anthropology graduates from one university did after finishing their undergraduate degree course. The table shows the salaries of the Anthropolgist in the work after five years.

The chart below shows what Anthropology graduates from one university did after finishing their undergraduate degree course. The table shows the salaries of the Anthropolgist in the work after five years.
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The chart describes the destination of Anthropology graduates from a particular university
whereas
 the table illustrates the salaries earned by the graduates after
being
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working in the Anthropology field for 5
years
time
. Generally, there 6 different types of destination and 4 different
of
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types of salary categories for the graduate students. After 5
years
 of working, salary
increment
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is
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 faster in
government
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 sector and for freelance consultants compared to those from
private
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sectors
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.
Firstly
, half of the students started to work full
time
with
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52% and
almost
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 equal percentage of graduates
work
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part
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time
 and stayed unemployed
with
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15% and 12% respectively. Not only that,
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 number of people decided to do
full
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time
 postgraduate study and some are unknown with
being
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8% .
However
, after 5
years
 of working
years
,
majority
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 of the government
staffs
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 earned more than $100,000 when compared to
private
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the private
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 sector with 50% and 30% respectively.
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,
equal
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 percentage of freelance consultants and civil workers earned $25000-$49999 and $50000-$74999 with 5% and 15% respectively.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words years, time with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "undefined" in your introduction.
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Vocabulary: The word "compared" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "percentage" was used 2 times.
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