The chart below shows what Anthropology graduates from one university did after finishing their undergraduate degree course. The table shows the salaries of the Anthropolgist in the work after five years.

The chart describes the destination of Anthropology graduates from a particular university

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the table illustrates the salaries earned by the graduates after

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working in the Anthropology field for 5

years

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. Generally, there 6 different types of destination and 4 different

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types of salary categories for the graduate students. After 5

years

of working, salary

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faster in

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sector and for freelance consultants compared to those from

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sectors

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.

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, half of the students started to work full

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52% and

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equal percentage of graduates

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part

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and stayed unemployed

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15% and 12% respectively. Not only that,

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number of people decided to do

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time

postgraduate study and some are unknown with

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8% .

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, after 5

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of working

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,

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of the government

staffs

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earned more than $100,000 when compared to

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sector with 50% and 30% respectively.

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percentage of freelance consultants and civil workers earned $25000-$49999 and $50000-$74999 with 5% and 15% respectively.