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The graph below shows different sources of air pollutants in the UK from 1990 to 2005. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant. (20 mins.)

The graph below shows different sources of air pollutants in the UK from 1990 to 2005. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant. (20 mins.)
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The line graph illustrates four sources of
air
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pollutants
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: transport, industry, households, and total
air
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pollutants
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. The data were collected between 1990 and 2005 in the United Kingdom. Units are expressed in
million
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tonnes
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.
Overall
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, the sources of
air
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pollutants
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 decreased, except for transport. The biggest source was industry and the least meaningful were households. More specifically, total
air
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 pollution was over six
million
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tonnes
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 in 1990. In the following years, the emissions had a rapid decrease until 1999, remained stable until 2002 and dropped again in 2005 with just under 4
million
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tonnes
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.
Moreover
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, industries put out just under 6
million
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tonnes
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 of
air
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pollutants
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 in 1990.
Then
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, the number had a steady fall until 1996 and continued dropping until 2005, with 2
million
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tonnes
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.
Furthermore
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, households started with approximately one
million
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tonnes
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 and dropped to almost zero.
Besides
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, the emissions from transport remained stable in the given period
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Basic structure: Use less body paragraphs.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words air, pollutants, million, tonnes with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "decreased" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "remained" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "stable" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "just under" was used 2 times.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • air pollutants
  • emissions
  • decrease
  • increase
  • stable
  • fluctuate
  • trend
  • peak
  • drop
  • significant
  • legislation
  • technological advancements
  • comparative analysis
  • contributors
  • households
  • transport
  • industry
  • regulation
  • pattern
  • anomaly
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