Compare the advantages and disadvantages of three of the following as media for communicating information. State which you consider to be the most effective. comics books radio television film theatre
Conducting communication via media is
critical
issue nowadays. Add an article
a critical
However
the best Add a comma
However,
ways
for conveying informations
are Change the wording
information
pieces of information
radio
, television
, and film
. This
essay is going to examine to
the three Change preposition
apply
ways
in terms of advantage
and Fix the agreement mistake
advantages
disadvantage
.
Up to now, many Fix the agreement mistake
disadvantages
film
producers mentioned people’s problems via films and television
. The
Correct article usage
Television
television
and cinema can provide lots of information only if their type of content are
documentary or historical. Change the verb form
is
Besides
ıf we watch them , we can easily understand some information ,furthermore
during the corona virus
outbreak in the year 2021, All around the Correct your spelling
coronavirus
world
several states continued their Add a comma
world,
students
educations through Change to a genitive case
student's
students'
television
. For example
in my country which is Turkey , the government makes produce films for pupil’s education. Although
the
cinema and Correct article usage
apply
film
have beneficial features , sometimes they can be so detrimental such
as during the watching documentary , the advertise
can show suddenly Replace the word
advertisement
therefore
people are distracted by it.
İn addition
they have a harmful effect rather than their benefits.
Add a comma
addition,
On the other hand
, From my point of view, the radio
is quite versatile . Even though ıt does not have display
trait and screen , the Correct article usage
a display
radio
quite
far from distracting objects. Add a missing verb
is quite
Such
as when I studied foreign
language ,Add an article
a foreign
while
I was listening
the Add the preposition
listening to
radio
at nights
. Many people do not prefer the Fix the agreement mistake
night
radio
just because ıt consists of one option which is listening to something. Even more
The latest Add a comma
more,
radio
called podcast is significantly effective because we can reach all information via podcast without being a
Change the article
apply
districted
. Correct your spelling
distracted
Also
it supports the children’s visualizations Add a comma
Also,
as well as
develops.
To conclude
three considerably effective ways
for
communicating are Change preposition
of
the
Correct article usage
apply
film
producing
, watching Replace the word
production
tv
and the Correct your spelling
TV
radio
. In my opinion
Add a comma
opinion,
listening
the Add the preposition
listening to
radio
has more qualifications than the other ways
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coherence cohesion
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coherence cohesion
Work on ensuring that each paragraph focuses on a single main idea and supports it thoroughly before moving to the next.
task achievement
Cite more specific examples to back up your points. For instance, provide more details about the educational programs run through television in Turkey.
task achievement
Ensure that all three media (radio, television, film) are compared comprehensively with balanced arguments for each.
task achievement
The essay covers the required task by discussing the advantages and disadvantages of three media for communicating information.
coherence cohesion
An introduction and conclusion are present, which help frame the essay and wrap up the discussion.
Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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Examples, if used properly, not only help you get higher marks for ‘Task Response’ but also for ‘Coherence’.
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Linking words for giving examples:
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- for instance
- to illustrate this
- to give a clear example
- such as
- namely
- to illustrate
- take, for example
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