Nowadays, various food and
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products
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not healthy
due to
sugar
levels, in
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consequencesFix the agreement mistake
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, many
people
suffersChange the verb form
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many
health
issues.
Thus
, to reduce the number of
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who
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sugar
, the
products
should be more least affordable. I personally do not agree with
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statement
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following reasons below.
The primary goal is to make
people
consumesChange the verb form
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healthier
foods
and drinks to reduce the
sugar
levels
that
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awful for
health
. In my opinion,
the first step is
to raise
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community and social
awareness
regarding
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the drawbacks
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over-consumptionCorrect article usage
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of
sugar
. I believe as the
awareness
started to increase,
people
would value their
health
better. The
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of
sugar
prices will not be a
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solution
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this
issue if the main goal is not achieved. One
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example to boost
this
awareness
is to
createsChange the verb
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a campaign in
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social media to
lesseningChange the form of the verb
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the consumption of unhealthy manufactured
foods
and drinks that have a high
level
of
sugar
by comparing the advantages and disadvantages of having a normal
level
of
sugar
and
over-Correct article usage
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sugar
level
. The solutions could be concluded
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the end of the campaign to
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people
to
consumesWrong verb form
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healthier dishes to
the surgary manufactured
products
.
Furthermore
, the increase
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sugar
prices will only offer a short-term solution as
sugar
is one of the main ingredients
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dishes and it will
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a negative impact
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many households.
Therefore
, the government could assist by sorting out manufactured
products
that
containsChange the verb form
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a danger
level
of
sugar
that could affect
people
's
health
.
In addition
, the
foods'Change noun form
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manufacturer
also
need a corporate social responsibility (CSR) that would reduce any awful ingredients in their
products
. In
this
way, consumers would feel more secure to purchase the
products
while
also
protecting their
health
. The company would get
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good branding in the eyes of society as well by applying
this
method.
In conclusion, the surge
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sugar
prices will affect many aspects
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people
's
lifeFix the agreement mistake
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.
However
, it will only offer a short-term solution in the
health
sector. To reduce the consumption of
sugar
, it is crucial to raise
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awareness
developingChange preposition
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a campaign program in
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society.
Moreover
, government and the
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manufacturerFix the agreement mistake
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also
play a key role
to sortChange preposition
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out the
products
and to be a responsible business for the community.