Maintaining public libraries is a waste of money since computer technology can replace thier functions. Do you agree or disagree?

Nowadays, with the development of modern

technology

, more and more traditional services are less popular than before and one of them is public

libraries

. There are many

people

feel

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that maintaining those

libraries

is not a suitable choice anymore and it’s a waste of money. The reason for

this

statement is

computer

technology

can replace and outweigh

tradition

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libraries

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library

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functions. In my opinion,

i

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do not agree with

this

statement because of some reasons. At

first,

people

need to find out and understand the advantages of the

computer

technology

. A clear thing is it is really convenient, the users just need a

computer

, a cellphone,... that can connect to the Internet to search for anything, they do not have to go outside to the library and find the book they want. Not only that,

those

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technology

can provide information at a faster speed than

the

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traditional books,

people

can get all the

thing

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things

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they want to know after

few

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a few

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seconds but the information is as clear as those in the books, sometimes

is

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more complete.

And user

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User

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can get information from many resources to have an

overall

view In spite of many benefits, the

computer

technology

can not replace the public

libraries

. The main reason is those

libraries

are a part of the country’s

tradition

and culture. They have

been

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existed for a very long time

along with

the development of the country.

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amount of

people

come

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to

library

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are

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is

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still really large and most of them are

the

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old and middle-aged

people

. Because of that,

maitaining

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maintaining

public

libraries

is not a waste of money, it is a way to

maitain

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maintain

a country’s

tradition

and

to

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creat

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a place for someone who

love

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to read books.

Overall

,

although

computer

technology

has all of the

tradition

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library’s functions and some other benefits,

but

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it can not replace

the

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apply

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public

libraries

because of some traditional factors and the

amount

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of

people

come

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to

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the library

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library

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libraries

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.