The line graph compares the proportion of the population of 4 different countries in Asia living in cities between 1970 and 2020, with projections to 2040.

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people in certain Asian countries who are living in cities from 1970 to the year twenty-twenty .

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one of the four countries has a huge number of its population living in cities that country being Malaysia as 80% of Malays are residing in a city . Coming in close is the Philippines with half of its people

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residents of a city . We can

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see that both Thailand

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Indonesia have similar numbers as by 2020 30% of Thai citizens and 40% of Indonesians live in cities.

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, for the upcoming years 2030 and

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we can

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that Malays will still be in the lead as when the time comes their numbers will be at 90% . As for the rest of the countries by these years they

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probably be levelled off with each other but they all will have a subtle gradual increase.

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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "also".

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Vocabulary: Only 6 basic words for charts were used.

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Vocabulary: The word "numbers of" was used 2 times.

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 8.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Introduction & conclusion present

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 5.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 5.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 9.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

3 paragraphs

159 words

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urbanization
proportion
projected
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population density
metropolitan areas
socio-economic factors
infrastructure
migration
policy changes
population pressure
economic opportunities
urban growth rates
globalization
technology
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The line graph compares the proportion of the population of 4 different countries in Asia living in cities between 1970 and 2020, with projections to 2040.

You stayed at your friends’ house when you participated in a business seminar in New Zealand. You left a file with important documents in your room. Write a letter to your friend, describing the file and ask him/her to return it to you by post.

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Scientists and technlogy experts seem to be more valued by modern society than musicians and artists. To what extent do you agree?

Young people who commit crimes should be treated in the same way as adults. To what extent do you agree or disagree?