The line graph compares the proportion of the population of 4 different countries in Asia living in cities between 1970 and 2020, with projections to 2040.
The shown graph provides information on the numbers of
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people in certain Asian countries who are living in cities from 1970 to the year twenty-twenty .
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Overall
one of the four countries has a huge number of its population living in cities that country being Malaysia as 80% of Malays are residing in a city . Coming in close is the Philippines with half of its people also
residents of a city . We can also
see that both Thailand ans
Indonesia have similar numbers as by 2020 30% of Thai citizens and 40% of Indonesians live in cities.
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2040,
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that Malays will still be in the lead as when the time comes their numbers will be at 90% . As for the rest of the countries by these years they Correct your spelling
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probably be levelled off with each other but they all will have a subtle gradual increase.Correct your spelling
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