The chart below shows the number of passengers arriving at a train station per hour across a day, and also the average price of their tickets.
The provided table gives information about the number of people who arrive at a particular train station
hour
and each day, and Correct determiner usage
every hour
also
it shows the ticket cost.
Overall
, it can be seen that the greatest number of arrivals is at 12 pm
, while
2 pm
is the least common trip. Moreover
, the most expensive trip is at 12 pm
, while
the cheapest is at 4 pm
.
To begin
with, 12 pm
and 8 am trips experience the highest rate of travellers who reach their destinations which are 700 and 690 individuals respectively. Meanwhile, arriving at the stations at 2 pm
and 10 pm
record the lowest with 290 and 300 commuters.
In addition
, the price of tickets has fluctuation. 12 pm
trip is the most expensive journey with $31 dollars . Followed by 8 am $29. 10 pm
and 6 pm
trips witness the cheapest price at $18 and $11 respectively.Submitted by fatmahaleesa on
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