The supplied bar chart above represents the data about people living in rural, urban and town who born in Australia or outside of state between 1995 and 2010.
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people
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were
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people
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areas
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cities
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people
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were
Australia
in 1995 and 2010 have some significant differentiations. In Use synonyms
cities
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percentage
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for
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of
people
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born in Change the verb form
were
Australia
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cent
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, Linking Words
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increased
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people
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born in Change the verb form
were
cities
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Australia
in 1995 was 20 per Use synonyms
cent
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was
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percentage
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cent
.
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Moreover
, Linking Words
people
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was
born outside Change the verb form
were
Australia
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also
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were
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apply
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cities area
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city areas
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cent
and in 2010 was 8 per Use synonyms
cent
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Lastly
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cent
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cent
.
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were
Australia
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cities
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increase
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