The pie charts indicate changes in the proportions of energy produced in a country from 1983 to 2003. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The pie charts indicate changes in the proportions of energy produced in a country from 1983 to 2003.

Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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The pie charts illustrate how much proportion of energy was produced in a country between 1983 and 2003 from the 6 main sources of
eenergy
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energy
.These charts
has
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6 main
source
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sources
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of energy. The proportion of oil production experienced a slight drop in the 20-year period from 42% to 38%.
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, it still took the leading position among those five.
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, the data on coal decreased significantly by 10%, reaching 13%, taking the fourth in 2003. The percentage of hydropower manufacture stabilized at 4%, which was the least since 1983.
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, the figures
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natural
gas
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and nuclear showed
upwards
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trends to 21% and 24%, respectively. The rise of natural
gas
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production was similar to the decline in coal.
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, natural
gas
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overtook coal
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the period.
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, it is clear from the chart that the percentage of oil and coal production showed downward movements ,
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natural
gas
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and nuclear power went up and hydropower remained stable.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words gas with synonyms.
Vocabulary: The word "charts" was used 3 times.
Vocabulary: The word "showed" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "percentage" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "proportion" was used 2 times.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • proportions
  • energy sources
  • increases
  • decreases
  • trends
  • analysis
  • significant
  • compare
  • changes over time
  • introduction
  • phase out
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