The diagram below shows how coffee is produced and prepared for sale in supermarkets and shops.

The diagram below shows how coffee is produced and prepared for sale in supermarkets and shops.
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The chart illustrates the
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of
coffee
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production and preparation for sale in the market.
It is clear that
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there are 11 main stages in the
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of producing
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and ready for consumption. The
process
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begins with the picking of
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beans
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and ends with the packing into containers. Looking at the first step of the
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, the
coffee
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beans are picked in fields and
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they are dried and roasted. After being cooled quickly, people put them into a grinding machine which turns the beans into
coffee
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granules. In the next step, they are mixed with hot water and the resulting mixture is strained.
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, the mixture is frozen and
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passed once through the grinder. After that the ground, frozen liquid is dried in a vacuum so that the water evaporates, leaving the
coffee
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granules.
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, these granules are packed into
coffee
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jars and ready for delivery to stores.
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