The charts below show the results of a survey about what people of different age groups say makes them most happy. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The charts below show the results of a survey about what people of different age groups say makes them most happy.

Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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The pie charts illustrate the reasons for gladness for two age groups.
Overall
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, it can be seen that the two main factors mentioned in the survey made up almost the same percentages for both age groups,
while
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the other four circumstances were different for both of them.
According to
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the graphs, the total number of men and women who said that doing hobbies made them most happy represented nearly half of the total participants.
This
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trend was followed by the option associated with achievement at work, which accounted for about 30% of each generation.
In contrast
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, the other 35 per cent of the total respondents chose dissimilar variants. The second least popular cause of joy among humans under 30 was
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, making up 15% of respondents,
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the same percentage of people over 30 opt for being with family.
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, having a good appearance is necessary for 18 per cent of juniors,
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the fifth part of another group gets satisfaction when they have financial security.
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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "while".
Vocabulary: The word "percentages" was used 2 times.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • survey
  • age groups
  • responses
  • happiness factors
  • participants
  • contribute
  • compare
  • patterns
  • differences
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