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The flowchart shows how furniture is made. Summarise the information in the flowchart by selecting and reporting the main features

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The flowchart depicts the making of
furniture
 in the
manufacturer
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manufacturer's
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 production line.
Firstly
,
furniture
 product was developed and designed by computer-aid software.
This
 programme was utilised to cut
wood
.
The next step is
 the assembly of pre-cut
wood
 pieces and the cut
wood
 is sanded to smoothen edges. In the finishing process, which is the slowest procedure of all processes, the sanded
wood
 pieces were painted or stained by both brush and spray to finish them. For the upholstery products process, the fabric was cut out from patterns by hand cutting or machine tools to create
furniture
 products
such
 as cushions, pillows, sofas and seats. After that, in the final preparation step cleaning and
dusted
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dusting
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furniture
 and sent to
appropriate
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the appropriate
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 department to inspect for any flaws or damages and repair them before the
furniture
 is packed in completed packaging.
Finally
, the
furniture
that is
 packed is ready to
distributed
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be distributed
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 to customers.
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language
Ensure consistency in verb tenses throughout the essay.
coherence
Enhance your logical structure by clearly separating the different stages of the process. A step-by-step description would be beneficial.
structure
Provide a brief introduction and conclusion to frame your description of the process.
language
Double-check for minor grammatical errors, e.g., incorrect usage of past tense in 'was developed' should be 'is developed'.
content
Good effort in detailing each stage of the furniture-making process.
language
Relevant technical terms like 'computer-aid software,' 'sanded,' and 'upholstery products' demonstrate a strong understanding of the subject matter.
content
Effective use of specific examples, such as mentioning different furniture items like 'cushions, pillows, sofas and seats.’

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