The diagram below shows how a biofuel called ethanol is produced. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The diagram below shows how a biofuel called ethanol is produced. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The diagram shows the way how the biofuel production goes and the way
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ethanol is produced.
Overall
, the 
process
 begins when plants and trees grow
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the
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sunlight and 
carbon
 
dioxide
, which gives them energy and finishes when 
carbon
 
dioxide
 is released by vehicles
as well as
returned to the atmosphere. The 
process
 includes three stages
such
as harvesting, pre-processing, and processing. These steps work continuously.
To begin
with, the cycle starts when trees receive sunlight and 
carbon
 
dioxide
 from 
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to grow, after which they are harvested for the next processing.
Afterward
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, these harvested plants transfer to the pre-processed
process
, namely they are chopped into small pieces of wood. Following 
this
, these pieces are turned into cellulose, which 
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the chemical 
process
 
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 the following step, during which sugars are extracted from them. After that, these sugars are mixed with microbes. The microbes consume sugars, leaving ethanol which is
then
used as a fuel for cars, trucks, and planes. When moving, these vehicles burn ethanol and release 
carbon
 
dioxide
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the atmosphere, which is ready to be consumed by plants again. 
Hence
, the 
process
 starts over again and again.
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