The diagram below shows how a biofuel called ethanol is produced. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The diagram shows the way how the biofuel production goes and the way
an
ethanol is produced.
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Overall
, the process
begins when plants and trees grow by
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through
the
sunlight and Correct article usage
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carbon
dioxide
, which gives them energy and finishes when carbon
dioxide
is released by vehicles as well as
returned to the atmosphere. The process
includes three stages such
as harvesting, pre-processing, and processing. These steps work continuously.
To begin
with, the cycle starts when trees receive sunlight and carbon
dioxide
from air
to grow, after which they are harvested for the next processing. Add an article
the air
Afterward
, these harvested plants transfer to the pre-processed Change the spelling
Afterwards
process
, namely they are chopped into small pieces of wood.
Following this
, these pieces are turned into cellulose, which face
the chemical Change the verb form
faces
process
on
the following step, during which sugars are extracted from them. After that, these sugars are mixed with microbes. The microbes consume sugars, leaving ethanol which is Change preposition
in
then
used as a fuel for cars, trucks, and planes. When moving, these vehicles burn ethanol and release carbon
dioxide
to
the atmosphere, which is ready to be consumed by plants again. Change preposition
into
Hence
, the process
starts over again and again.Submitted by dnm.best on
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