The diagram shows the Process of Pu-erh Raw Tea and Ripe Tea. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.
The diagram illustrates the different stages of producing
pu-erh
raw Use synonyms
tea
and ripe Use synonyms
tea
.
Looking from an Use synonyms
overall
perspective, it is readily apparent that the process of creating Linking Words
pu-erh
products is made of five distinct stages.
The first phase of producing both varieties of Use synonyms
tea
is frying the leaf in a relatively large pan to deactivate the enzymes. Use synonyms
Then
, fried leaves are rolled and placed under the sun to become dry. In the next stage, the outcome of dried leaves which are loose raw Linking Words
tea
is used for producing different types of Use synonyms
tea
. In terms of making vintage Use synonyms
pu-erh
raw Use synonyms
tea
, loose raw Use synonyms
tea
is compressed and Use synonyms
then
stored in a special place. By ageing, the vintage Linking Words
pu-erh
raw Use synonyms
tea
process ends.
The process of making Use synonyms
pu-erh
ripe Use synonyms
tea
consists of different procedures than raw Use synonyms
tea
. In the beginning, the loose raw Use synonyms
tea
was fermented with mould. Use synonyms
Finally
, fermented loose ripe Linking Words
tea
is compressed to create the final product, Use synonyms
pu-erh
ripe Use synonyms
tea
.Use synonyms
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