The diagram shows the Process of Pu-erh Raw Tea and Ripe Tea. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.
The diagram illustrates the different stages of producing
pu-erh
raw tea
and ripe tea
.
Looking from an overall
perspective, it is readily apparent that the process of creating pu-erh
products is made of five distinct stages.
The first phase of producing both varieties of tea
is frying the leaf in a relatively large pan to deactivate the enzymes. Then
, fried leaves are rolled and placed under the sun to become dry. In the next stage, the outcome of dried leaves which are loose raw tea
is used for producing different types of tea
. In terms of making vintage pu-erh
raw tea
, loose raw tea
is compressed and then
stored in a special place. By ageing, the vintage pu-erh
raw tea
process ends.
The process of making pu-erh
ripe tea
consists of different procedures than raw tea
. In the beginning, the loose raw tea
was fermented with mould. Finally
, fermented loose ripe tea
is compressed to create the final product, pu-erh
ripe tea
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