The maps below show the centre of a small town called Islip as it is now, and plans for its development. Summarise the infrromation by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The maps below show the centre of a small town called Islip as it is now, and plans for its development.

Summarise the infrromation by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
This
map illustrates the intermediary of
small
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a small
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town
as it is now, and plans to
development
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in the future
this
town
called.
Overall
, the
islip
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Islip
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town
transformed from a predominantly housing to an urban
center
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centre
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with improved infrastructure,
residental
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residential
and commercial options and car parks. In terms of now Islip
underdeveloped
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,
charecterized
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characterized
characterised
by a handful of houses in the middle.There
have
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main
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a main
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road in the north and surrounded
with
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basically
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shops
while
undeveloped
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area in the southern part of the
town
and in the
easthern
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eastern
copmrised
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comprised
comprises
a large park. Respectively in future Islip developed very
beautifull
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beautiful
city
. The main road will change to pedestrians only and around the
city
will build ways
while
in the north and in the south corner will build new housing. In the intermediary
city
will build
bus
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station in the northern corner and in the end pedestrian road will
build
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car
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park
while
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will
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significant densification . At the base
city
variety of new houses will
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be constructured
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constructured
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constructed
and
north
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will
build
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introduction
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of multiple shops, centrally located for accessibility.
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