The maps below show the centre of a small town called Islip as it is now, and plans for its development. Summarise the infrromation by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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This
map illustrates the intermediary of a small town
as it is now, and plans to develop in the future this
town
called.
Overall
, the Islip town
transformed from a predominantly housing to an urban centre with improved infrastructure, residential and commercial options and car parks.
In terms of now Islip is underdeveloped, characterized by a handful of houses in the middle. There is a main road in the north and surrounded by basic shops while
an undeveloped area in the southern part of the town
and in the eastern copmrises
a large park.
Respectively in future Islip developed very beautiful Correct your spelling
comprises
city
. The main road will change to pedestrians only and around the city
will build ways while
in the north and in the south corner will build new housing. In the intermediary city
will build
, a bus station in the northern corner and Wrong verb form
be built
in
the end pedestrian road will be a car park with significant densification . At the base Change preposition
at
city
variety of new houses will constructed and the north will introduce the introduction of multiple shops, centrally located for accessibility.Submitted by mamashukuruvbobur31 on
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