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The maps below show the centre of a small town called Islip as it is now, and plans for its development. Summarise the infrromation by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The maps below show the centre of a small town called Islip as it is now, and plans for its development. Summarise the infrromation by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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This
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 map illustrates the intermediary of a small
town
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 as it is now, and plans to develop in the future
this
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town
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 called.
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, the Islip
town
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 transformed from a predominantly housing to an urban centre with improved infrastructure, residential and commercial options and car parks. In terms of now Islip is underdeveloped, characterized by a handful of houses in the middle. There is a main road in the north and surrounded by basic shops
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 an undeveloped area in the southern part of the
town
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 and in the eastern
copmrises
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comprises
 a large park. Respectively in future Islip developed very beautiful
city
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. The main road will change to pedestrians only and around the
city
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 will build ways
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 in the north and in the south corner will build new housing. In the intermediary
city
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 will
build
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be built
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, a bus station in the northern corner and
in
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at
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 the end pedestrian road will be a car park with significant densification . At the base
city
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 variety of new houses will constructed and the north will introduce the introduction of multiple shops, centrally located for accessibility.

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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "while".
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Basic structure: Change the third paragraph.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words town, city with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: Only 6 basic words for charts were used.
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Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the third paragraph.
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