Nowadays many people choose to be self-employed, rather than to work for a company or organisation. why might this be the case? wHAT COULD BE THE DISADVANTAGES OF BEING SELF-EMPLOYED?

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Answer the 'Advantages and Disadvantages' topic

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Introduction
Body paragraph 1 – advantages
Body paragraph 2 – disadvantages
Conclusion

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The disadvantage of this...
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Despite these advantages...
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Topic Vocabulary:

self-employment
freelancing
entrepreneurship
autonomy
financial stability
work-life balance
financial insecurity
lack of support
resources
long working hours
uncertain income
job security

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