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The chart below shows the amount spent on six consumer goods in four European countries. Write a report for a university lecturer describing the information shown below. Spending in Thousand Pound Sterling

The chart below shows the amount spent on six consumer goods in four European countries. Write a report for a university lecturer describing the information shown below. Spending in Thousand Pound Sterling
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The chart gives information about 6 different prices of
goods
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 in four European countries which are Britain, France , Italy and Germany . The units are measured in pounds sterling.
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 we can say that one of the highest prices is
he
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the
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 photographic film , as opposed to personal stereos and toys which have the lowest fare . Britain had an expensive consumer of
goods
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 price because ,
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 the chart it had 170 pounds to buyphotographic film
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 Italy has remained steady so in
this
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 country , the
goods
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of
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prices have remained steady by around 150 pounds. The German
goods
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 paying just has experienced high figure within the perfumes ,
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 The France
goods
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 have shown higher numbers in the two objects which are toys and CDs.

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Common mistake: Your writing should be 150-250 words.
Basic structure: Change the second paragraph.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words goods with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "chart" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "remained" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the second paragraph.
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Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the third paragraph.
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