The bar chart compares the share of Britain’s population who consumed five or more portions of fruits and vegetables in their daily meals. The data is categorised according to gender and age.

The bar chart compares the share of Britain’s population who consumed five or more portions of fruits and vegetables in their daily meals. The data is categorised according to gender and age.
The chart illustrates the expenditure
of
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the portions of produce, including fruits and vegetables in Britain for the
years
2001 to 2008, with the data categorised depending on age and gender.
Overall
, it is evident that woman has the highest
expenditures
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across all
categories
throughout the given period compared to
children
and
men
. A notable trend is that all 3
categories
began increasing in the succeeding
years
.
Additionally
, the least amount of the
consumptions
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of fruits and vegetables was among
children
across all
years
. In 2001, women accounted for the highest expenditure, with well over 20%.
This
was followed by
men
, which was approximately 15%.
Children
accounted for the lowest share
in
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this
year at roughly 10%. Numbers remained uniform during the next year, but women's expenditure experienced a slight increase. Continually, over the period of 2003
women
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number continued gradually increasing, reaching just over 25%.
On the other hand
, in 2004 numbers remained relatively higher.
As all
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categories
remained surging, with
woman
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at marginally over 25% and
men
at approximately 20%.
Children
's consumption followed, with just past 15%. Numbers substantially escalated in 2006, with
woman
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accounting for the highest share in all
years
at around 35%.
Subsequently
,
men
and
children
followed at well over 25% and approximately 20%. Figures started gradually dropping during 2007 and 2008 across all
categories
.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words years, categories, children, men with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "gradually" was used 2 times.

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Topic Vocabulary:
  • portion
  • consumption
  • gender
  • age group
  • percentage
  • daily meals
  • recommendation
  • trend
  • health impact
  • government intervention
  • increase
  • decrease
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