The map displays the development of the village of Ryemouth between 1995 and present. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant. Write at least 150 words.

The map displays the development of the village of Ryemouth between 1995 and present. 

Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.

Write at least 150 words.
The map illustrates the changes in the layout of Ryemouth village from 1995 to now.
Overall
, The Village area has undergone significant transformation including new amenities
such
as Golf and tennis grounds, car parking, restaurants and fish markets.
However
, some regions still remain unchanged. In 1995, the east part was occupied by farmland and a forest park beneath that there was a hotel. Across the highway on the south side, the largest sea with a fishing port is presented close to that cafe on the
south-east
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southeast
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and the fish market on the
south-west
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southwest
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. On the other side of the pathway opposite to trade acquired with shops. Along that roadway, directly connected to housing spaces towards the north-west part. Moving after redevelopment, the current map showed the tremendous recreation. The golf and tennis playstation was created by replacing the farmland and forest park.
Also
, the shop and fish market rearranged as restaurants and apartments now. Next to the hotel, the car park was extended along the central main lane towards the north housing street
further
expanded directly from the middle on the sides and constructed new buildings. The sea space was updated by removing the port.
However
, the cafe and hotel on the south-east and housing boards on the north-west remain relatively the same.
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