The charts give information about two genres of TV programmes watched by men and women and four different age groups in Australia

The charts give information about two genres of TV programmes watched by men and women and four different age groups in Australia
The presented diagram compares the viewing habits of two genres of TV programmes-
reality
show
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shows
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and
game
show
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shows
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- among men and women and across four
age
groups in Australia.
Overall
, as can be seen in the illustration, both
reality
and
game
shows are most popular among
people
aged 45 and over.
Reality
shows are more popular among females in Australia , with 70% of women watching them.
In contrast
,
game
shows have
higher
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a higher
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male viewing rate, which is practically 65%.
According to
the given chart,
it is clear that
the highest percentage of viewers of both genres are adults aged over 45, which
nearly
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is nearly
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70%.
Reality
shows are least popular among the younger
age
groups, particularly those
who
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aged 16-24,
while
game
shows have the
least
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lowest
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percentage of
people
in
age
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the age
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groups of 25-33. The diagram reveals that there are far fewer
people
aged 35-44 watching
game
shows than
reality
shows.
In contrast
, there are many more
people
in
age
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the age
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group 25-33 who watch
reality
shows than
game
shows.
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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "in contrast".
Vocabulary: Replace the words reality, game, age, people with synonyms.
Vocabulary: The word "diagram" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "show" was used 11 times.
Vocabulary: The word "percentage" was used 2 times.

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