The two maps below show an island, before and after the construction of some tourist facilities. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The two maps below show an island, before and after the construction of some tourist facilities. 

Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The first picture illustrates the former condition of an
island
and the second shows how it had developed after the construction process for some tourist facilities. It is noticeable that the
island
experienced a lot of changes during that period of time. There are six types of facilities which were constructed
due to
the development of tourism so it will be accessible and convenient for visitors. Looking back, the area was completely an
island
surrounded by trees in the middle of the sea. Recently, fifteen guest houses have been built to accommodate visitors. The reception building is placed at the centre of the
island
so it will be near all of the building facilities. Meanwhile, the restaurant is placed behind the reception and facing the view of the sea. Accessibility features have
also
been built on the
island
such
as a pier, vehicle track, and footpath. The pier has been built as an entrance gate for the ships and yachts and welcomes visitors with an astonishing view of the sea. The vehicle track was constructed from the pier toward the reception and around its building so it is linked to the guest house and restaurant.
Lastly
, there is a footpath to connect each of the guest houses and access to the beach.
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