The chart below shows how frequently people in the USA ate in fast food restaurants between 2003 and 2013.
The chart illustrates the frequency of humans in
USA
partaking Correct article usage
the USA
junk
Change preposition
in junk
food
in restaurants between the years 2003 and 2013.
It should be note
that the majority of people who ate fast Change the verb form
be noted
food
dominate
Wrong verb form
dominated
from
the range of those who ate once a week or twice a month in the years 2006 and 2013. The lowest percentages are from those who eat daily Change preposition
apply
and
followed by those who do not eat junk Correct word choice
apply
food
at all.
The highest of junk food
eaters are
almost 33% found in 2006 and 2013 in people who eat fast foods once a week and Unnecessary verb
apply
also
once or twice a month. These were followed by almost 31% who ate once a week and also
those who ate once or twice a month with 30%.
The lowest percentage is almost 2.5% and it is seen in people who eat
faddy Wrong verb form
ate
food
daily in 2006 and 2013 having the same percentage and and
followed by almost 4% in 2003. Correct word choice
apply
Moreso
, those who never ate faddy Correct your spelling
Moreover
food
were also
below 5% in 2003 and about 4.5% in both 2006 and 2013.Submitted by pncubeterera on
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