The diagram details the process of making smoked fish. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The diagram illustrates how smoked
fish
is made.
Looking from an overall
perspective, it is readily apparent that making smoked fish
is composed of three main stages. Also
, many different jobs are included to produce this
item.
In the beginning, fish
are caught by big nets and then
transported to the port by boats. The caught fish
are then
frozen, and when they are ready for the smoking process, they will be mixed with fresh water to thaw. In the next stage, the molten fish
are chopped into pieces and then
mixed with salt water and yellow colour.
The chopped fish
are ready for the smoking process after being mixed with salt and yellow colour. Next,
smoked fish
are packaged in containers and frozen at zero degrees centigrade in a bigger container. The frozen fish
are stored in a cold box and ready to be distributed. The final product is then
sent to fish
shops for retail.Submitted by amir1375.6 on
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