Last month you had an overseas hoiday with some friends where you stayed at their house. They have just sent you some holiday photos. Write a letter to your friends.
My friends,
Hope you all are
good
.I just saw our Dubai holiday Change the word
well
phtotos
which I Correct your spelling
photos
recevied
Correct your spelling
received
by
Ratesh today. Change preposition
from
Firstly
, when I saw our all trip membories
Correct your spelling
memories
are came
in front of my eyes. I have Change the verb form
are come
are coming
plan
for our winter holiday too. If you all Add an article
a plan
are agree
can Change the verb form
agree
be
go again on Correct your spelling
we
trip
Correct article usage
a trip
somewere
? Correct your spelling
somewhere
However
, I received our all pictures but, I did not get our house photos. Those ones were really good thought
. Fix the agreement mistake
thoughts
Furthermore
, I wish
we can meet again as soon as possible,For Verb problem
hope
now
good wishes to all of you from your friend.
Gursewak Add the comma(s)
now,
singh
.Change the capitalization
Singh
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task achievement
In the opening sentence, it's better to add a salutation such as 'Dear friends,' rather than just 'My friends,'. This sets a more personal tone.
coherence cohesion
Make sure to proofread your letter to avoid spelling errors, e.g., 'phtotos' should be 'photos' and 'recevied' should be 'received'.
task achievement
Your effort to share personal feelings and memories from the trip makes the letter more engaging and sincere.
coherence cohesion
The closing statement is warm and friendly, which is suitable for a letter to friends.
The Greeting
Depending on the style and aim of the letter, you will need to adapt your greeting.
Always start an informal letter in the ways:
- Dear + name
- Hi / Hello + name
‘Dear...’ is more appropriate, so stick with this.
For a formal letter there are two options for the greeting:
- Use Dear Sir or Madam if you don’t know the name of the person you are writing to.
- Use Dear + surname if you do know their name, e.g. Dear Mr Smith or Dear Mrs Jones.
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