The chart below shows the distribution of different income groups in cities and regional centres of Australia. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The chart below shows the distribution of different income groups in cities and regional centres of Australia.

Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The bar chart illustrates the percentages of various income
category
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categories
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in
cities
and regional centres of Australia.
Overall
, it is clear from the graph that
middle
and lower
middle
groups
are the highest in both
cities
and regional centres.
However
, the low and the high categories are the lowest
also
in both
cities
and regional centres. The biggest percentage of all
groups
is
middle
in
cities
.
According to
what is shown in
cities
, the proportion of
middle
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the middle
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class is 35 per
cent
,
it
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which
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is the highest,
while
the percentage of
lower
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the lower
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middle
is less than the
middle
groups
by 5 per
cent
. The proportions of low and high
groups
are around 13 per
cent
and 20 per
cent
respectively.
Additionally
, In
regional
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region
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, the proportion of lower
middle
groups
is around 35 per
cent
and it is similar to the percentage of the
middle
group in
cities
, it is the biggest among all classes.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words cities, middle, groups, cent with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "percentages" was used 4 times.
Vocabulary: The word "proportion" was used 3 times.
Vocabulary: The word "around" was used 2 times.

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