The graph below shows the different modes of transport used to travel to and from work in one European city in 1960, 1980 and 2000.
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grpah
illustrates the different modes of transport used to travel to and from work in one European city in 1960, 1980 and 2000. There are four types of transport ways : Correct your spelling
graph
graphic
bus
, car, bike and foot
.
Overall
, Add an article
the car
car
had an Fix the agreement mistake
cars
increasement
but walking and using Correct your spelling
increase
bike
had Correct article usage
a bike
an
Change the article
a
decreasement
during the given Correct your spelling
decreased
peirod
. And Correct your spelling
period
useness
of Correct your spelling
useless
bus
rose in 1980 but Fix the agreement mistake
buses
it
declined in 2000.
In 1960, people usually walked when they Correct pronoun usage
they
go
to other places. The figure Wrong verb form
went
of
Change preposition
for
foot
is 35, compared to figures Fix the agreement mistake
feet
of
other modes of moving are below 30. Change preposition
for
However
after 20 years, the frequency of using Add a comma
However,
bus
was the highest amongCorrect article usage
the bus
4
categories. And Correct article usage
the 4
numerical
value of going by Correct article usage
the numerical
foot
dropped under 20. At last
, in 2000, the most popular transport method was car
, which had over 35 Add an article
a car
the car
figure
. Fix the agreement mistake
figures
Bus
and foot
followed next,
and bike
was the lowest one. As technology was developed, Add an article
the bike
popular
moving method Add an article
the popular
also
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