The diagram below presents the process by which bricks are made for the building industry. Summarie the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The diagram below presents the process by which bricks are made for the building industry. 

Summarie the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The process diagram below displays how bricks are manufactured.
Firstly
, an excavator digs through dirt to get clay.
Then
, it is crushed through
metal
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the metal
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grid and rolled.
Thereupon
, it gets mixed with water and sand. Now, there are two options.
First
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one is to cut the heavy material with
wire
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cutter and
second
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one is to make a special shape of bricks. Following that, they put it in a drying oven in order to get rid of wet resources. After all of
this
, it is heated up in
kiln
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the kiln
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.
First,
it is
stinged
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to 200-980 degrees Celsius but
then
it is heated up again up to 870-1300 degrees Celsius. It is obvious that it is impossible to use
such
a hot object. So, it is cooled down for 2-3 days and packaged to
truck
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the truck
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which
deliveries
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bricks to the building shops.
Overall
, there are 7 stages, some equipment and 3 implements in
brick-making
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the brick-making
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procedure.
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