The diagram below gives how uranium is used in the production of nuclear power. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. You should write at least 150 words.
The diagram displays the action of nuclear power by employing
uranium
.
Overall
,there are six stages,beginning with Uranium
is
included out of Earth and ending up with used Wrong verb form
being
fuel
that’s not suitable for recycling is stored and buried in containers.
As we can see, that
Correct word choice
apply
Uranium
is occupied with the aid Earth
by mining.At Change preposition
of Earth
this
stage,uranium
ore is transformed and enriched to produce some fuel
pellets on a volume of U-235.This
Change the determiner
These
fuel
powers are really substantial to improve electricity too rapidly.
Following
this
, during
for the past four years Change preposition
apply
after
they Correct word choice
apply
will
Verb problem
were
destroy
.Some of Wrong verb form
destroyed
waste
of Add an article
the waste
fuel
re-processed
or re-used.Unfortunately, Add a missing verb
is re-processed
fuel
can not be reprocessed.Submitted by akzharkynzhamal on
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Contractions: Don't use contractions.
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Common mistake: Your writing should be 150-250 words.
Basic structure: Change the second paragraph.
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Basic structure: Change the fourth paragraph.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words uranium, fuel with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: Only 5 basic words for charts were used.
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Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the second paragraph.
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Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the fourth paragraph.
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